Ships laden with sky and sea
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Françoise Dhulesia
What a beautiful and intimate poem, Sushama!
I have read it as a symphony in words, as a jugalbandi between yourself the poetess and soulmates Paul Eluard and Charles Baudelaire. …
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Françoise Dhulesia Thanks Francoise. For your kind words. They made me humble, especially while reading your references to Eluard and Baudelaire. Iam nowhere near them.
Imust say however, that I liked your perception of the albatross as a metaphorica…
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Sushama Karnik Am so glad you are writing again, Sushama and sharing. I must confess I had missed you and your work a lot.
For me, I do not see this poem as an attempt but as being in the perfect continuity of what I had read before, in its fluidity,…
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Françoise Dhulesia
I have reactified a typo, please read: the sea is also a theme dear to them.
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Sushama Karnik
Rebeca Barcenas Thank you so much!
for this beautiful and apt picture of the sky and the sea , and moon and the boat
for this beautiful and apt picture of the sky and the sea , and moon and the boatFrançoise Dhulesia
What a beautiful and intimate poem, Sushama!
I have read it as a symphony in words, as a jugalbandi between yourself the poetess and soulmates Paul Eluard and Charles Baudelaire.
The three artists and sculptors of words that you three are celebrate Poetry and your journey through Life.
The surrealist touches that are intrinsically Eluard’s poetry and that I had very often underlined in your work become one here: I like the visual impact present in your poem, reminding me of the love Eluard had for plastic arts, in particular painting and photography; the sea is also a theme dear to them. I feel you have added some Baudelairian accents in the evocation of the albatross, referring here to the symbolical significance of the bird as a metaphorical image of the poet’s moral and spiritual grandeur. God and Poetry as enlightening the world and guiding us through our voyages and journeys: thank you for sharing, Sushama!
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Sushama Karnik
Françoise Dhulesia Thanks Francoise. For your kind words. They made me humble, especially while reading your references to Eluard and Baudelaire. Iam nowhere near them.
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Sushama Karnik Am so glad you are writing again, Sushama and sharing. I must confess I had missed you and your work a lot.
As far as Baudelaire is concerned, his poem "L'albatros" interestingly lead me to yours. My idea of mentioning the poem was spontaneous.
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I have reactified a typo, please read: the sea is also a theme dear to them.
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Rebeca Barcenas Thank you so much! for this beautiful and apt picture of the sky and the sea , and moon and the boat
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Sushama Karnik
The night was darkening fast.Yet not as much dark as was deepening in the blue.
The gorge of the sea was silently strong
And the echoes of our muted tones…
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Hakeber Bkb
Sushama Karnik wooow!!
Tu relato, interesante...pleno de misticismo... Como siempre..
Hermosa la narrativa que utilizas...…
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Sushama Karnik
Rebeca Barcenas Thanks for your beautiful comment and the mystical pictur
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Sushama Karnik
Thanks Rebeca 
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