A Quiet Rain

Drop me a quiet rain.

Drip, drip like the rain of a fabulous night

walking in the rain, running, running

on the pavements darkened and grey..

Shine, shine on the streets of stone.

Shine, shine as I walk on them.

Dark grey passers-by,

they drift like clouds skating the sky.

I look for faces hidden,

hidden behind the screen of fog.

Everyone leaves, everyone scurries,

Everyone is changing, chasing dreams.

Drop me a quiet rain,

bright as the day falling on stones.

I'll catch it in my palms and let it flow

until my fingers chill and turn into ice.

Let the dreamy green smile of rain

spread across the fields, and meadows

Drop, drop me a quiet rain.

Sushama Karnik.

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Françoise Dhulesia

I like the rhythm very much and how this joyful and glimmering "quiet rain" plays hide and seek between reality and dream!

What beautiful scenes to visualise: from the dark and gray tones of the city to the greenery of a bountiful nature, you are cond… 

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Sushama Karnik

Françoise Dhulesia Thank you Francoise for sharing your beautiful comment. It was a joy to read it.