A Rare Summer With A Dark Sky

 April 28, 2023

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A RARE SUMMER WITH A DARK SKY

A rare summer with a dark sky letting the sunshine sneak

and play hide and seek with the sea and the sand.

Taking a hint I watch from a distance

the children play in the ebbing waters,

safe and trusting the tide too in this hour of a cosmic playfulness.

A faraway sea and a faraway child, a red dot prancing on the sand; my eternal sand is lying low,

taking in this hour of vastness and peace.

Sushama Karnik.

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Arun Joshi

You are too good 

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Sushama Karnik

Arun Joshi Thank you

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Françoise Dhulesia

You are that universal observer of others' lives, generously embracing a scene with a caring eye. You so naturally camp an atmosphere with a few focal points that catch the readers' imagination and help them feel the scene and be part of it almost! Yes… 

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Sushama Karnik

Françoise Dhulesia Brilliant. Your mind weaves a tapestry of associations and memories, and goes beyond an ordinary response, and this happens so effortlessly in your case. you widen my horizons with springs of inspiration.