Sunday, April 28, 2024

 There, some godly beings

in robes of pink,
their bodies, drawn in a hazy ink.
I saw them fly past a sacred ring.
I saw them: a lady emerging in the greyish dawn,
her wisdom-child walking along, touching the brim of morning light.
As if someone had drawn them with the evening hues
and waited through the dark for the night to end.
In the light of the dawn, they flew
unfettered on the wings of the swan.
Sushama Karnik.
28/04/2021

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Great 👍
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Sachin Chand
Well penned , keep it up 👏
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Sushama Karnik
Sachin Chand Thanks. Will try🙂
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Françoise Dhulesia
The way you recall your vision or your dream is wonderful!
"I saw them": yes, there is absolutely no doubt about it and the reader follows you, entering your word until the swan disappears.
I like the beauty in this oneiric moment.
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Sushama Karnik
Françoise Dhulesia A lovely comment. Your words always lead me to reflect upon what I wrote and the words are enriched more by the light you throw upon them The reader is as much a creator as is the writer. Thank you Francoise.❤🙏
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Françoise Dhulesia
Sushama Karnik Please read "entering your *world". Sorry for the typo.
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बढिया बिम्ब खींचा है।👍
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